This was a final essay I wrote for a poetry class. We were asked, based on what poetry we learned about during class and then wrote examples ourself, which form of poetry was our favorite. This is the essay I turned in:
My
favorite chapbook assignment was the free verse assignment. Although my particular poem that I did for
the assignment was not very good, I love the freedom this type of poem gives. I enjoy rhyming and repetition and all the
various other poetic devices, but I really like the unrestrained freedom that
free verse gives. Without being
constrained to a specific rhyme pattern or meter, I can concentrate on the
words, tone, imagery and meaning I’m trying to convey in my poem.
Writing
the ordinary in an extraordinary way by using the imagery and language is the
goal of any poet. Sometimes a word you
need to convey an image is not rhyming with the poem you are writing. By using the free verse you can use a
specific word without trying to force it into a mold or form determined by a
set of standards and rules from literature.
Other
poets have used this type of poetry for years.
One of my favorites is A Noiseless
Patient Spider by Walt Whitman. The “gossamer thread” gives such a poignant
image that I cannot imagine it being forced into a rhyme or meter.
Walt Whitman, poet |
Similary Ted Kooser uses free verse in So This is Nebraska. Not
only does he throw rhyme and meter out, he also ends verses and begins new ones
without punctuation where you expect it.
The images of trucks in the weeds and dancing on dirt roads is beyond
beautiful. Kooser is talented enough
that I believe he could have conveyed a similar poem following all of the hard
cut rules. However, I feel some of the
freedom and openness felt in this poem would have been lost by conforming. The last three verses are as follows:
You feel like that; you feel like
letting
your tires go flat, like letting the
mice
build a nest in your muffler, like
being
no more than a truck in the weeds,
clucking with chickens or sticky with honey
or holding a skinny old man in your
lap
while he watches the road, waiting
for someone to wave to. You feel like
waving. You feel like stopping the car
and dancing around on the road. You
wave
instead and leave your hand out
gliding
larklike over the wheat, over the houses.
The imagery is beyond beautiful.
My hope is to someday write even half as beautifully as this and as
others have written as well. Free verse
frees my soul.
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